Rough Copy of Music Video + Feedback

After presenting the video to a fresh pair of eyes, we received many positive comments on the location shots as well as the editing to the beat. Another positive comment we received on our music video was the transitions and direct correlation to the song lyrics such as mentioning a train coinciding with the visuals. However, suggested improvements were to clean up the fast pace flickers and make them more consistent as well as brushing up on the lip-synching. There were also some noticeable errors regarding the lighting of one of our shots as someone claimed it was "distracting", this can be easily corrected by cutting the footage to the part it is focused and has the correct lighting. Again the sequence including the male actor was mentioned, and suggested we get rid of it as a whole or re-shoot making sure it is of better quality.